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Hello I want to revise the “My Voice Project” based on my instructor’s note please

This is good, Meshal. My one revision suggestion is to reframe the intro of your reflection. You outline what you’ve learned through the research, but you don’t give your reader a good explanation of where you began and how you’ve changed. What were your views and understandings before you began researching? How did those views change? Right now this reads like a list of things you learned, which is fine, but this will be more powerful if you include ways that your ideas and understandings have actually changed and evolved. To do this, all you need to do is give us a good description of your views and understandings prior to your research. This reflection focuses on the “after” of the process; balance this with the “before.”