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revise the paper into 8-10 papges according to the following comments:<\/p>\n
1. there a lot of grammar, sentence structure and other mistakes. I had trouble understanding your argument in “The weak point of the economy” part of your paper.
\n2. You do a good job laying out the three phases after WWII, including your section on birth control and population decreases, but your paper ends up being more of a descriptive paper rathern than analysis.
\n3. Having read to the end of your paper, I am still unsure what your why question, puzzle and argument is. You need to work that out more.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
revise the paper into 8-10 papges according to the following comments: 1. there a lot of grammar, sentence structure and other mistakes. I had trouble understanding your argument in “The weak point of the economy” part of your paper. 2. You do a good job laying out the three phases after WWII, including your section […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":"","_joinchat":[]},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/168828"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=168828"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/168828\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=168828"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=168828"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=168828"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}