\n W8 Assignment: Revising an Academic Rough Draft \u00a0from week 6\n <\/p>\n
\n “Dieting Makes People Fat”\n <\/p>\n
\n To get a feel for revision, please review the sample student essay, below,\u00a0from Week 6. This time, you can see both the student\u2019s\u00a0original\u00a0draft and the revised\u00a0final\u00a0draft. Note how the student did more than correct format and grammatical errors. The entire approach to the argument was improved after the student considered feedback from his instructor and classmates.Sample Researched Argument\n <\/p>\n
\n First DraftSample Researched Argument 1\n <\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
W8 Assignment: Revising an Academic Rough Draft \u00a0from week 6 “Dieting Makes People Fat” To get a feel for revision, please review the sample student essay, below,\u00a0from Week 6. This time, you can see both the student\u2019s\u00a0original\u00a0draft and the revised\u00a0final\u00a0draft. Note how the student did more than correct format and grammatical errors. The entire approach […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":"","_joinchat":[]},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/241841"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=241841"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/241841\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=241841"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=241841"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/qualityassignments.net\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=241841"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}