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For this revision, you will rewrite your Observational Essay by directing it to David P. Barash himself, the author of \u201cThe Roar of the Crowd.\u201d We all recall that Mr. Barash sounded quite hostile to the whole idea of watch sports; he felt it was a waste of time at best, and at worst it was too close to the kind of group mentality that in the past has lead to fascism and genocide. He also felt that making heroes out of sports figures was a mistake.<\/p>\n
We mostly agreed that Mr. Barash was pretty extreme in his language, and we also observed that it was almost as if he himself had never been to a sporting event, or if he had been, he had not observed with an open mind. Well, YOU have been to a sporting event, and you have observed the spectators carefully. Your job in revising your second rough draft is to write letter to Mr. Barash, sympathetically summarizing his concerns and sharing some of your observations as a defense of spectators.<\/p>\n
Your revision must include the following elements:<\/p>\n
You do not have to do any additional research for this revision. You can, if you like, include any of your own experiences as an athlete or a fan, in addition to sharing your observations.<\/p>\n
Your revision must take the format of a letter to Mr. Barash. That means\u2026<\/p>\n
Length Requirement<\/p>\n
This revision may end up being SHORTER than your rough draft\u2014you will cut some of your observations, though you will have to add the brief summary of Barash\u2019s concerns. Aim for between 3 pages double-spaced.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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