Assignment: Responding to Feedback

For this Assignment, you will review the Learning Resources on feedback, and flow and cohesion. With the principles outlined in the Learning Resources in mind, you will further revise your paragraph from the Week 5 Assignment.

Feedback from Professor for changes:

I see you building more connective tissue between quotes, which is good. That said, as you do so, be careful not to lose a sense of clarity on the sentence level. After you add in your ideas, comb through the writing so that you can have a clear and effective discussion.

To prepare for this Assignment:

• Review the Learning Resources on feedback, and flow and cohesion.
• Review feedback obtained from your Instructor (weekly assignments) and from colleagues (Discussion posts). You may wish to make a list of topics that your Instructor has raised in their feedback to you over the previous weeks, and construct a reference file for use in your future revisions.

The Assignment:

Revise the three paragraphs from the Week 5 Assignment, addressing relevant feedback from your Instructor. You may also add new content to your paragraphs. However, you should not use any other sources beyond your chosen article.